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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Haha, yes! This was excellent, CJ! I love the modern twist on a vampire/human treaty, but the way you brought in Chuck's characterization was absolutely my favorite part. Excellent characterization, and the satisfaction of knowing he was right, is masterfully undercut by the tragic end.

I loved the last line too about how he was finally right. Awesome work, my friend!

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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Loved the pacing on this one CJ

Built just right.

Chuck’s arc, especially how his paranoia ends up being true, was a smart twist.

I wasn’t sure where it was heading at first, but that final payoff landed well.

Creepy in all the right ways:)

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